Score: 8
"A bit too heavy"
date: November 14, 2006
Felt like there was too many elements trying to fight to get through the same frequency area, which made it quite it quite cluttered. Some EQ'ing may help, but still it's important to try not to over-produce a track. Sure they are nice sounding soft-synths, but you don't really need them all now do you?
I also really like tracks which seems that vary from really heavy parts to much softer parts with only a few instruments. Makes it a lot more dynamic. Here you were hit by a brickwall of sound, and it seemed to last through the whole song.
Keep doing your thing, you are off to a good start.
Author's Response:
Very good point. The funny thing about this song is that the "evacuate" sound was actually created by my mouth. Don't know if this song is really worth trying to fix...