Decent

So this was "NOTBAD" it was kind of low sounding so you may want to think about adding some more sound quality to it and louder then you may want to make this longer with much more variaty and mixture to it, just an idea im throwing out at you, other then that this was actually not half bad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you may want to think about adding some more sound quality to it and louder then you may want to make this longer with much more variaty and mixture to it, just an idea im throwing out at you

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srry 4 dis

to short and repeats itself over and over