Dude!

C'mon man! I loved that intro, reminds me of something from some high-energy trance album or whatever, or Cosmic Gate, :P

But then you just THREW in a kick? Just for kicks? :P no pun intended, lol.

Btw, thats vansterguard ain't it?

Dude c'mon man, btw, WHERE IS THE BASSLINE DROP???? this track would sound so much better if the bassline dropped after the other half of the melody like 3 notes or something.

Ewwww, :( sorry man. too much vanguard and kickiness, cant take it, :(

good try i guess though. Just, next time when you start out with a melody like that, throw a pad in instead, then make the bass fade in or smoething, THEN stop it, and burst in with the full beat or something, never just THROW a kick in, :(

check out my stuff btw, :D if you have the time, :D

Oops

Didn't notice you worked on it more. My bad, I reviewed your first version. Pretty much what I said in the first, except take out the parts where I said things you need to improve because in this version you improved them. I like this. Has a nice dance melody, the synths are awesome what did you use for them?

Just a few glitches in this one too...the synths are loud, too loud, and when there are 2 of them going at the same time, they cover each other and all the other sounds up. The kick is the default fruity loops one, try using a better one becuase that one is cheap and annoying. Great melody though.

I can improve onto it if you send me the Fruity Loops file by the Email I gave you in the review of the first version of this one. The bass that comes in is off key too, but those things won't be hard to fix.

Talk to you soon!

-ChiRoN