Hmm

Hmm, i don't really like the fact you used pre-sets for this.
But if this is your first little song i can understand it.
The first thing repeats too much, then the voice comes in.
And then the synth, which plays some melody's in too different rhythms, you have some good melody's in mind but in this song, (i still have to listen to your others) you have too much problems with making the good rhythms.
Needs work, but i heard worse things.

it was sweet

I really liked it man, nice work

Great first run man!

This song had great and unique elements in it. minimalistic for the most part. the amen and overdrived kick was well executed and fitting to the pad. as vegetarianmeat said, the glitch was well placed, but not well executed. i can totally see this in a game.

overall awesome first song! hope too see more of this kind of music.

fivenz f0r teh maen

Cool

Nice ambient D&B type music, the synths are really cool. It would make great background music for a game or menu.

Smad.

A very nice first submission.

There is a lot of potential in this song. The drums were really cool, and the main synth was great. Nice melody as well. The glitch parts were a good idea, but there weren't executed very well. Since this your first submission it doesn't really matter anyways though. Overall, the song was really good considering it's your first one.

Fived :)