wow

almost perfect!

a note

Needs to be shorter, it can be a pain to download a song, and have a looping one that's 5 minutes long. Also, it would be better for disc space, and file space. But good job anyway.

Sorry man...

I love the track you remixed ^_^
It sounds too midish though. You should have changed a lot in this track and actually have made it a remix instead of just a replica.

And yes, the clarity is horrible. Why didn't you master it a lot more? If you know there is a single bad thing with it you should remove it and then submit instead of just thinking "Nah, that's not so important." and submit it away. And if you don't know how to master it then you're obviously stealing.

The instruments are lacking sense. I don't know why you choosed these horrible instruments to it, especially when they're this shimmering and peaking.

You know, at times remix reviews are a bit limited as you can't review the melody since it isn't original. Therefore there is a lack of good sides in this review, this is clearly not the best song out there, and it's not the worst either.

The main problem is the mastering. fix it.