Nice sounds

This was a nice sound, and good beat goinghere it was actually pretty solid and while it was a deep sound it had a nice feel and touch to it so very nice work there, now i dont think i would add anymore except make it longer somehow, but keep with the same deep style, but other then that this was pretty brilliant and nice tune here, hope to hear more of your work sometime soon.

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So as i said this is a good deep beat and i would leave it as is.

8-bit relaxed

Sounds like a video game tune.Really cool too!

Yeah it is actually

yeah playing both songs and the original on a cell phone and they are the same...but deffinitly your own mix of it.