Score: 0
"New review, since I guess I was mean last time."
date: November 8, 2008
Apparently last time I wrote a review, it was not approved by the M-Bot. So I'll give it another shot, and ill try to be nice.
First off, tune your guitar. Not joking, I can tell that its badly out of tune. Invest in some kind of electronic tuner. Second, tweak your distortion. I dont know what pedal you use but I know you could get better tone out of it. Third, solos aren't needed, so don't put any in unless its actually worth-while. The solo in this song is just bad... period. Theres no structure, no quality, nothing.
Last thing: Practice more and study the pro's. If you wanted, you could keep this song, just improve on it later once you have the skills to make it a kick ass metal song. If you need help or wonder how guitar gods create such insane solos, study them. Find videos of live performances, study the musical structure, etc. Lessons are worth it if you are somewhat serious about playing guitar. I just play for fun and jam with friends, but I took lessons for 4 years and it definately helped my playing.
Dont get angry and ignore my review. If you actually listen to what I say, you'll actually have good music that people will enjoy listening to.