Score: 9
"lol, sytrus, :P"
date: October 23, 2006
First "true" song? What does that mean? lol. Anyway, i'll give a quick review, due to the fact that i dont have alot of time on my hands.
+ sounds in-tune
+ you used necessary trance FX, such as buildups (the snare roll), etc
+ you have a fairly decent trance/song structure going on here
+ nice synths, even though they're presets
+ nice extra melodies you added on throughout the song
+you seem to have kept your volume at a pretty reasonable level, definitely a plus
- kinda boring
- doesn't really sound like trance, :(
- no main melody really
- kick is WAY to weak, EQ it a bit
= Overall pretty neat, at least its in-tune, thats not how my old/sytrus stuff was, lol. It was just messy clicking really, :P
Anyways, i have a new account with new stuff, i've had it for a while and have been improving and adding onto it as much as possible, if you have the time, i'd love it if you could leave a review or two for me, Thanks.
:D
Author's Response:
True song because other songs made on a crappy online dealy... cept for one which was just so people could tell me how to get better. And I really really never know what genre something is... i just guess lol. And the pads (err synth or whatever you called it) i made in a vst. But yea i have trouble with main melody :( Thanks for the review :) i appreciate any and all...