Dinosaur Party

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Dinosaur Party

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Here's a short music I made today, and I think it's cool enough to share it with you.

PLEASE COMMENT !
Your feedback is very important for me !

Hope you like it ;)

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svmmit

2015-08-13 20:09:30

Heres my honest critique.

The melodies and originality, 10/10. I love the energy and melodies in the track and totally respect the uniqueness/originality.

But, there's two things I feel you can improve on.

First, the default FL studio club drum samples. I actually didn't think it was a big deal when I started producing, but trust me, good percussion can go a long way. You can probably search the web lightly and find a few decent and royally free drum sample packs.

Second, The song lacks sub bass. Try adding sub synth to bring out some low end in the song, it will help a ton. Just make sure that you don't let the sub drown anything else out or distort anything. other than that dude, again, I absolutely love the melodies and the track is pretty great.

good work.

Anitrik responds:

Thank you very much for your long and constructive feedback !

Also yes, as other people noticed it, I used the FL default drums and it was a bad idea.
I play guitar in real life so that may be the reason why I'm quite good at creating melodies, but I've started to create music with FL just some days ago and that's why it is very important for me that experimented people like you help me to master this software.

About the drums, I've already searched only for some cool samples and I was very surprised to see that there are lots and lots of them ! My next song will bring cooler drums ;)

And about the sub bass, it's a very nice idea too, I get the feeling that it helps me to make my music sounds more like "professional music", and of course I'll keep in mind this advice for all my next projects !

Thank you again for your feedback ! :)

SIDEPROJECT

2015-08-12 16:53:02

i agree with the guy below me. also, make the offbeat bass a bit more prominent. but not too overbearing.

Anitrik responds:

Thank you ! I'll keep in mind your advice :)

OdiousBones

2015-08-12 15:18:23

This is pretty cool, don't recommend using the default FL drums.

Anitrik responds:

Thank you ! You're right, these drums are not really the best ones. I will use others drums ^^
Thank you very much for your feedback :)

Ziojade