Impressive!
Awesome! Extended! Listening!
The piece moves along pretty smoothly, I must say the image i'm seeing now, has somewhat changed, perhaps because of the extended parts, and the additional reverb really altered it's core, but not in a bad way.
I kind of wish you had brought in that cello sooner into the song, it just adds a whole other level of depth to it.
I'm glad you extended it, I was really able to fully enjoy it this time. Also you must have just created the most seamless loop I have ever heard. The silence at the end, and initial pause at the beginning has created a very convincing loop, so top marks for that.
Lets see... it's equally hard to really suggest any improvements or ideas this time around as well... I just don't think there is anything I could suggest, except to keep them coming! Another 5/5 bomb for you!