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Jul 31, 2015 | 12:44 AM EDT
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Song
7.3 MB
4 min 33 sec
Score
4.47 / 5.00

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Rated 4.47 / 5 stars
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617 Plays | 12 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Classic Rock
Tags:
german
wall
isolation
berlin

Author Comments

So my submission took more than i expected, i wanted it to be top notch heh This time i experimented with languages!! have a classic rock song about the isolation of the Berlin wall! (Or well, that's what i tried to express, my sis helped me tog et the lyrics right since she is the one who knows to speak German)

Music, Lyrics and Production: NyxTheShield (Felipe Montero)
Main Vocals: Valentina Montero (My Sis)
Back Vocals: Constanza Gac (Sys's friend lol)

I hope you enjoy it ^^

Reviews


SirSpaghettiSirSpaghetti

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is really good! i love the sound when you slide through the frets



ChromaShiftChromaShift

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That's a really good piece of music, it's simply beautiful. I'm from Germany myself but didn't grow up in this time (glad that I didn't grow up there). I don't understand the lyrics sometimes, I think because it's sung with an italic accent (nothing wrong with that) ^^ I also relate to some of the aspects already said by "TaintedLogic" just that you mustn't read almost the same again ^^

4,5/5 -Schinkn
Beautiful, a little minus because I really wanted to hear the vocals ^^' I hope you're okay with that :/


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NyxTheShield responds:

Hahah i am glad you liked it !!


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I like the easy, feel-good guitar sound at the beginning. Sounds like a montage played over the images of a lone traveler across a wide-open plain. I thought it was a little hard to follow the rhythm during the intro, and a hat or kick to keep the beat would've helped (but that's a tiny detail). The vocals work really well, and sound really good. I would suggest providing the lyrics (in English, please), because, well, it's hard to judge them if I can't understand what they're saying. I noticed some repeated sections in the piece, but otherwise it was kind of hard to discern the structure of the piece from around the 1 - 3 minute mark. I would try adding some percussion and/or heavy guitars during the refrain to help contrast the verse and the chorus. I also think the drums could've been a bit louder throughout. Still, that guitar solo at 2:50 is awesome. I didn't think the piece was terribly conclusive (maybe it would've been more conclusive if I knew what she was saying at the end, though!). I'll admit that I do love the smooth, almost soothing vibe this has. I know this isn't really what you were going for, but it sounds like the vocalist is almost trying to calm down this weary traveler. :) I think you really captured what you were going for genre-wise, though: it definitely has a pre-90s, edgeless guitar sound that I really like. I think it's an important point that I'm able to capture the emotion in this piece without knowing what the lyrics mean. :) The solo at 2:50 also adds quite a bit of structural relief that otherwise, tbh, is a little bit lacking in this piece. Overall, though, this is really solid work. Nice job, NyxTheShield! :D

9/10


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SeprixSeprix

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The tune is quite good. The foreign language makes it sound nice as well. Sadly, this song is bread and butter. It needs something more to it, and what that is is entirely up to you. By the time the guitar solo runs by, that is a much needed addition to a song that was starting to get old. You could have counter melody with a guitar while the singing is going on once in awhile for example. Give some ear candy for others on repeated listens, something making it worth another listen.


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