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Oct 12, 2006 | 10:13 PM EDT
File Info
3.2 MB
3 min 29 sec
1.81 / 5.00

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Rated 1.81 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

Work in progress...I'd like to know if the melody is workin out



Rated 0 / 5 stars

Uh huh

My ears bled.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


this sucks man. look up cheshyre for good techno.

Mr-green-apple responds:

hahaha check my newer stuff bro. this was like my first track i ever made. soooo noob


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


you need to put more stuff man!!!
i like how the kicks and strings interact but it doesnt sound like you really put your hart to this.
in the middle the song worsens.
please remix this and use more complicated drums :(
i woulda liked it :((((((((((((more)))))))))))))

Mr-green-apple responds:

i think im guna try and remake a couple of my old songs....cuz iv've definetely learned a shit load more about FL now then back when i made this track. ill keep you posted one i remake some songs


Rated 3 / 5 stars


It has its moments. Nice tunes and beat, but it gets kinda borning within a min into the song. Keep it up though =3 Everyone has their moments, like me when I draw, one min I can draw perfectly, but sometimes I draw like crap. Im not saying this tune is crap or anything, just needs some work =3


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


I'm not going to hop on the review section here to slam an original piece of work, nor am I here to jump your shit over a crappy review, as I don't post my music on the Audio Portal. Suffice to say that it had potential, but didn't go anywhere. Lacked substance, is the feeling. Also, yes, this is techno, and techno repeats, but this felt like it dragged on forever. Find something to fill in the empty spaces and work on the beats and I think you might make something decent.