Very kool :D

Hmm this is a very nice tribute =]
I love the bassline :) It really gives a nice
videogame feeling for some reason,
which is exactly the thing i really like :D
SOunds very good n stuff. Some things that could
be changed maybe:

- I think there's abit overuse of the sawsynth
here, sounds flat, Could have some (filtering)FX
and maybe some more reverb/delay effects.
The sawsynth's sound like they are on a same
layer or something. Reverb/delay can bring
the sounds to multi dimensions.

hmm well that's I think the only thing that
could've changed. But for the rest it sounds
very amazing. Exactly the melody-style that I
like ;)

Well done!
-PX9

Needs a little more work

Cool song, but it seems to miss something...maybe make the background synth that appear after about 10 secs a little louder and fade back to how they are now when the melody sets in, and maybe add a stronger beat, dont pump up the volume of the current beat but add another one in thats a little sronger than the current one.
It has good potential but just needs that bit of fine tuning.

*hint*

jeah i can hear tha this song is the mario boss song , but wAAAY cooler , the ony thing is that the thing that repeats does a lot of fuckage to the song , so my hint here is " put the reapeatable to the back ground ( fading) when the melody starts" ( or before the melody starts)

i mean: the repeating is nicely done, but when it repeats it starts sucking...

but jeah good done

hehehe

Nice beat. But the syntage is a little repetitive and cheap. You should make songs for you ,and not for paragonx9 .You did a nice job though, keep progressing!

Still roxors

Read, last review. Still roxors.