Lacks a bit of direction but very imaginative and non-formulaic. that's what counts in my book. I like it!

sooooo diverse :)

This tune has an amazing amount of diversity to it, starting off pretty harsh (most of your tunes sound a tad dark) almost sinister then transforms into a really happier tune, which is cool! and it was your first FL tune! cool :)

Nicely done! this is getting 10's across the board!

Keep banging 'em out man!

Peace Out!

Stealth

superior

Its hard to belive that this is youre first song

ANGRA >:-(

It`s quite good.
Not the most original song there, but I liked how you waved the tempo, and mixed the instruments.
For the genre, choose between Techno and New Wave
...I think.
You need a better title.

Pretty good

Ha, I remember my first song I made in FL... and it was pretty terrible. It is hard to start on a new program. But it seems you did pretty good.

Anyways, this song was pretty good. I liked it. It had a nice beat and melody and bass fit is good, but it was a bit wierd how the song progressed. For example, it would just suddenly change into a totally different sound. Although wierd, it is an kind of interesting technique.

I would have to say the ending was the best part of the song, or the part I liked the best. It had a calming sound, which was a big departure from the beginning of the piece.

Overall it was pretty good piece. Keep practicing and try to find different samples and sounds to use. You are on your way to become a good artist^_^

-SineRider