Well i thought id do something more into rap so tell me what ya think DIS SHIT IS FIRE!!!!
Well I really liked this except for a few issues
Well man you got skillz, this was a pretty good track, though it did tend to be rather repetetive, but keep at 'em i'm sure you'll nail it with a little more time and effort
Keep up the good work
Peace Out
Stealth
Oh would it be too much to ask if you could reciprocate with a review of some of my audio aswell please?
Cheers!
good but u need more!
When i heard the start i was like AWWW YEAH, THIS IS GONNA BE CRUNK!!!!
Then the strings came in and i was like AWWW YEAH, THIS IS GONNA BE CRUNK!!!!
But...it wasn't crunk, it was like half crunk(lol)
The talent is there add more, i don't know what u tell u to help out, but it needed more oomph,
One thing i can definitly say is that it is too repetitive u have to constantly have variation to keep your fans running back.
Come check out my stuff, maybe it would be better to hear than to read, and also check out my man, Greeksta-69, his beats be bangin' he gave me an inspiration or two for a few of my tracks.
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Tatally agree bro i definately needed sum more in this track, u sould have saw me going through every last thing in fl to make it work but i need sum help from an elite personel in this area nothing would work on this song so if any would like to help ill let someone finish it for me.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
MattBlade 
