The chord progression and arrangement of this was pretty good :D. I actually love the track apart from the mixing . I think the main problem is that you don't eq your synths properly. I advise you to go through a tutorial on eq'ing . A good or bad eq makes or breaks a track like this.
I agree with Keitomine that compression is important as well, but if the eq is bad, compression will only make it worse. concentrate on learning proper eq'ing for now, and I promise you that you won't regret it :).

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I really enjoyed the chord progression, but the mixing does leave much to be desired. Keep up the good work! ^-^