Score: 9
"Damn fine"
date: September 26, 2006
Now that I know it's you singing, I can review the piece fairly better :D.
Again, you've got that trance quality in the piece, it's really really calming, and yet this one sounds warped. Like there's a reversed voice in there as well? Do you have a reversed voice in there? It really sounds freaky, and yet enticing at the same time. If I saw this in a live performance, i'd swear one of the singers were possessed!
For just vocal work this is really well done. I would really expect nothing less though, this is the voice of angels after all. However if you were to add instruments to the piece I think a nice deep cello would accompany the voice excellentely. Perhaps a light flute to sing along.
I would also even so far as to suggest an organ! Now there's a sound I think would dramatically alter the core of this piece. Powerful, trance, darkly possessed (that reverse sound feel), and just damn entertaining!
Anyways, that my two cents, I would like you to check out some of my files sometime. This gets my 5, keep them coming!
Author's Response:
no reversed voices, but I did try for more emotion in this one, more than one emotion I mean, as far as the reviews have said, I hit the nail on the head.
I had to do about ten seperate recordings, including the shutting door, (you can hear the door to the stairwell shut in the end of the piece, but it added such a nice touch, I left bit there.)I'm investing in some nice recording software sooner or later, so I'll be able to add instumental tracks to my vocal ones eventually.