Like a ringtone.

Well, you just CAN'T make good metal with a computer!
This sounds like a polyphonic ringtone ,and it doesn't loop well, it just starts over.
When you make loops , make sure that they loop well or else you'll get bad scores..
But, For a metal loop made in a computer, this is really good.
Hell , if this was an acctual ringtone , i'd use it!

I give it 3 out of 5.