0:00 Nice polyrhythmic intro. Good gat riffs rolling over each other.
0:29 Good mixing of the drums here. This has a very 90s vibe.
0:41 It's all quite clean and very exceptional.
0:55 Vocals are a little bit off, in my opinion, or they need to be EQ'd better. I don't know, I just felt like when the vocals were introduced, the energy of the song went down.
1:20 But here, at the chorus, it's better. The energy is higher. It is quite difficult to get the vocals down, it's just. Yeah. It's a balancing act.
1:40 I just think the vocals are pitchy, I mean I don't blame you, I'm not so hot a singer myself.
1:59 Was a good note for the singer but the rest is not quite pleasant to be honest. But anyway, it might be the fact that the voice is mixed so far behind the instruments, so that it feels drowned out by everything else, but even then it might just be that the lead singers need a little bit of training.

I feel kind of bad saying that, but it's a little bit true. But if you're just a few guys hanging out and having fun, then it's all good. Wish you all the best as a band, and hope for you to succeed.

Cheers,
ZigZag