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Uploaded
Mar 16, 2015 | 1:50 AM EDT
File Info
Song
3 MB
3 min 19 sec
Score
4.00 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
441 Plays | 5 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
Tags:
indie
original
bass
acoustic

Author Comments

Wrote while recording, and took me about 5 hours to get it to where somewhere I'm comfortable with. Equipment is limited, so I used what I had :)

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I like the organic guitar sound at the beginning. The vocals are generally good, but I think you need to enunciate your consonants more because it's hard to determine what you're saying at times. I would appreciate it if you left the lyrics in the description in the future. It's a pretty well-structured piece, and I like the warm, feel-good vibe it has. The simplicity gives it a really human quality. The ending was a bit sudden and inconclusive IMO. I also think the echo effects you used at 1:42 sort of detracted from the organic, down-to-earth vibe I thought you were going for. You probably could've done more with dynamic contrast and melodic development, too. Still, I admire your sense of harmony and progression, and it's a very smooth-flowing piece. Overall, I like it! Keep up the good work, Norway69. ;)

7.5/10


Norway69 responds:

Thanks Tainted. Most of music on here is experiments I do, and layer by layer did it as you say on the spot. I have a feeling I will rerecord it in the future and do it properly because it turned out quite nice :)


MegaGoldMegaGold

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The guitar chords used are so good. Very enjoyable. The vocals aren't too bad, good on the tone and way better than I can sing. The chorus is alright, but the chords before and after are what really got me. The quality is quite well for actually playing guitar. The tempo is on point. Could have added more of a bridge and outro, but it was good for what you did. And good job for only taking five hours on it. 2 thumbs up.


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Norway69 responds:

Hey thanks :D Writing music is my stress reliever and hearing people actually like it is great!


JaThuJaThu

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice song! I think the ending was kinda repetitive and you could add some reverb in your vocals, but I really liked it anyway :D