no melody

Poorly mixed, bad melody, kicks are weak, and i overall felt nothing because it lacks pacing. Go ahead and call this immature if you want but this is just my opinion.

Hi there! :) I review/criticize tracks on the audio portal in three categories:
- Mixing (Technical part, volume, frequency balance, etc.)
- Composition (Melody, chord progression, intervals, etc.)
- Feeling (Basically what I feel while listening)
Remember, this is all my personal opinion ;) I listen with a Sennheiser 650 HD headphone.
I apologize in advanced for my English :D

Mixing:
In my opinion this track is kind of poorly mixed. The bass sound doesn’t have much sub and the kick can have a lot more punch. I don’t want to see you need to make a punchy EDM track, but at the moment it is kind of unbalanced. The sounds are layered on top of each other instead of mixed together. At 0:36 the track/vocals are clipping too.

Composition:
The composition isn’t very special to me. This isn’t a bad thing at all, but look out that you don’t make it to simple. It may give the feeling of: „Heard it already…”

Feeling:
It feels unfinished to me. Because it needs a lot of mixing it lacks the feeling of emotion.
Tip: Look up some mixing tutorials. It sounds like you are missing the basics a little.
Rating: 2 stars

I fell asleep

If you add some choir to the music,it will be better.