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Jan 19, 2015 | 5:03 PM EST
File Info
1.2 MB
1 min 22 sec
2.50 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.50 / 5 stars
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268 Plays | 3 Downloads
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Author Comments

My very first song! Created on Finale Notepad 2012! Would love some feedback on it! <3



Rated 1 / 5 stars

This sounds very out of tune in some places.
The song structure needs a TON of work.
The transitions are too rough.
Perhaps this would suit a video game if nothing was going on, and everything is calm, but you still need to make it sound interesting.
Most people would pity you for this being your first song, but I won't because I wanna help you get better, and do whatever it takes to do so.
You really have to master your music, and you know that.

You're really good and you must understand your DAW really well, but at the end of the day, if it doesn't sound good, it isn't.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

This has a really nice melody, but you need to add bass tracks. They have instruments that play in the background of the main tracks and sometimes harmonize with the main instrument. Maybe you should remake this sometime.

DJRyanAB responds:

Thanks for your review ;D
I might do that sometime when i'm not too busy. (i have too many hobbies such as band, programming, etc.) that will take some time .:)