Good stuf

This is a pretty good start, I think your percussional work could use some revising, they're a tad loud those snares, and I didn't quite hear the kick, which should be a good deal louder.

Also if you're using FL Studio which I think you are, press f9 to bring up the mixer window, and add a reverb effect, preset 4 (cathedral) to those kicks and snares. Trust me the effect they will have on them will be quite grand.

The melody and everything flows just fine. I'm not sure about what the person below me means by cut out, I didn't hear it, maybe I didn't catch it, but yeah.

You could become a great DJ if you keep pushing, which I hope you will, I hear some good potential in you. 5/5 from me, keep them coming.

I'd also like you to listen to a few of my pieces, you will see what I mean by adding reverb, all of those songs I have up there are very heavily reverbed, and the effect it gives them is quite epic.

With all that said, take care ^^.

nice remix

it's very uplifting...I think you might want to add some more air time or a slower fade-out in the middle there...I hope you understand where I'm talking about..there's a section where you cut off the music for a good 4th of a second or so and continue...that section...lol...well, overall, I really liked this! well organized, nice journey throughout the song :) keep up the good work! :D

If you get a chance, please check out and vote for my song (Dark Riots)...it's been getting low votes for some reason :(