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Credits & Info

Uploaded
Dec 30, 2014 | 7:39 PM EST
File Info
Song
8.1 MB
3 min 32 sec
Score
2.10 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
429 Plays | 10 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
Tags:
death
suicide
love
murder

Author Comments

Murder and Suicide is a song (poem) that I wrote a few months ago. It is meant to be kind of a bittersweet sound, to even depressing. The message is pretty obvious, basically about killing someone then taking your own life, but doing so based off of love.

Lyrics:
Take your blood
Take your veins
Take this knife from my hand
Here's your sorrow
Laying on the ground
You cry in such pain
Still no sound

There are things I wish that I could find
Places that I wish that I could fly
There are stars that I could never reach
but I'm not happy on the ground

Take your blood
Take your rights
Take this heart beat from my chest
Here's your love
Laying so very lonely
You cry out for forgiveness
Still no regrets

I just needed to set myself free
sorry if that meant the end for us
Man I wish that you could of seen me fly
but you had clipped my wings for far to long

Take your blood
Take your bitterness
Take this your final breath
Here's your moment
Laying on this ground
You cry out for your life
Still no pity

There are things I wish that I could find
Places that I wish that I could fly
There are stars that I could never reach
but I'm not happy on the ground

Take your blood
Take your pain
Take this numbness from my body
Here's your chance
Lay it on me
You cry out for me
Still no care

Take my blood
Take my life
Take these your bitter memories
Here's our moment
Laying here cold dead
We cry no more
Still ever so still

all I wanted was to be set
from the person you tried to make me

Reviews


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Rated 2 / 5 stars

i liked the instrumental, but i didn't like the voice, only because the voice wasn't mixed in with the instrumental well enough.

if you ever need any mastering help, feel free to talk to me.
it never hurts to ask.

also, in the song bio you should post the lyrics.
i feel like this has more potential.


11linda responds:

Well the instrumental isn't mine. I did put who's it was in the credit and roles. As for the mixing. I tried my best, I used to mix in mixcraft and adobe audition, but I lost these and had to go back to audacity, which I can never get to mix as well as I would like to. Thank you for the offer! I may take you up on that. I'll add the lyrics now.