_-={Cloak of Wonderment}=-_

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Date
08/27/2006
File Info
Song
2 MB
2 min 11 sec
Score
4.07 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.07 / 5 stars
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Genres:
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Author Comments

A serene, gentle piece, A soft tingling mist. Let it soothe your mind

Reviews


HiddenShadeHiddenShade

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 8, 2008

Wonderous

The last soldier alive walked slowly through the forest, birds chirping around him, nature in full swing. But, he did not smile. A bird came to rest on his shoulder, he didn't shoo it away. He did not smile. Why doesn't he smile? This forest is the site of the last battle, where every man but himself was killed. The two forces had been equal in strength and numbers. But, this one man had been left with another, the last man from the opposing side. Left with no choice, the man had killed that last soldier. Then, pulled out of the memories, the man came to the clearing where the greatest warriors of his side were buried. A huge stone obelisk stood in the center of the clearing, names scrawled over every side. One name was bigger than the rest, and covered the space where 10 more names could have fit. It was the name of the man's greatest enemy. He did not smile. He moved on, then came to the shrine where the opposing side was buried. Graffiti covered the entire shrine, done by reckless youth. The man pulled out a washcloth and washed the graffiti off, for hours and hours. He finally revealed the black marble surface, gazing at the large name on this shrine. It was the name of his dearest friend. He finally smiled, for his friend was watching and he knew he was forgiven.

The man's best friend was the last soldier standing on the enemy's side.

-Shade


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MaestroRage responds:

This story made me smile HiddenShade. Such sentiment, and to imagine it play out in my head. Truly moving in every way.

I wish there was a way I could type out how this story made me feel, but the words don't come and the phrases don't form. Thank you with all my heart for your story, and this review.

I'm glad you liked this piece.


SprintTSprintT

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 7, 2008

Beautiful

Again an amazing song!

A poem to go with it :D
What I got out of this peace:

"True Warriors Death"

A sorrow end
A blissful peace
A great rest death would lend
Great burden this would release

Years spent toiling over sword and shield.
A kind hearted fighter.
A man that knew not how to yield.
Of his own destiny he was the writer.

Yet as all stories must this man's ended, in death.
To that of the cold hand of the reaper.
A word of gratitude was the last breath.
For now equality was his keeper.


MaestroRage responds:

quite the knack for forming those rhymes eh SprintT?! Quite impressive if I do say so myself.

I can only hope every warrior finds peace one their death bed. Too many end up alone, surrounded by a thick wall of anger and hatred they use to defend themselves against the pains of taking life.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!


SorondosSorondos

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 3, 2008

Beautiful

As he alone sat upon the stones over looking the mass graves of his former enemies and allies alike, he pondered what was it all worth. Was it done out of duty? Was it out of need?

With a heavy heart, he gathered the remnants of his things, and began to go home.

He would share this tale, that no matter the war, the cause, and soldiers that fought them be they of different age, race, sex. In death they were equal, and nothing would change that, their blood was the same.


MaestroRage responds:

Such true words Sorondos. Death doesn't much care for where you came from and where you wanted to go, the hand that reaches to your grave is blind to your tears and deaf to your cries. Well written, very enjoyable.

Thank you for the story and the review! I'm glad you liked it!


shmirgshmirg

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 20, 2007

Nice.

The sound of gunfire had halted a long time ago, but it was still quiet. soldiers looked from the trenches, as white flag after white flag was raised over the other side. both joy and confusion struck the troop, but soon, guns were thrown down, and them men ran out of the trenches. No longer had they stay in these stupid small holes, for it was finaly over.


MaestroRage responds:

A surrender eh? A bit reckless they were to run out of the trenches without their weapons, but I can picture the pure joy and bliss they must have felt for knowing the war stops here. Things were finally going to go right, and people would stop dying.

Thank you for the review and story, i'm glad you liked it!


runescapeoprunescapeop

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 16, 2007

wow

"I've got it. After the years of work. It was hard, but i have it now." Kozan looked up at the setting sky, the clouds turning pink. The sun was slowly begining to hide when Kozan smiled and repeated, "I've finally found the cure at last, the cure to stop this war."


MaestroRage responds:

A moment of great piece and achievement... hmm I love moments like that. To know that you have in your hands, a source of relief and great good. Such a moment is for very few to ever realize experience. I wonder how it feels...

oh well, thank you for the story runescapeop! Thank you for sharing it, and for the review, i'm glad you liked it!