you should work on that synth starting at 1:00. It does not fit too well to the rest.
maybe make the bassline more interesting. I think the song sounds a bit boring. You can maybe change this by adding some sort of breaks or "surprise elements".
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im not done with this one,
hope to get some reaction about how to improve this,
and what i can do to make it better.
im a little stuck.
but when i have the time for it,
(bizzy with work thats why i havent time to make some progress with this one)
i will finish it. i have to make a second refraiin.
love to get some feedback :P
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