Score: 7

"Ending suggestion"

by: avaz21

date: December 16, 2007

Here's an idea I had when I was listening to it. At the end now, right after that cymbal, you continue for 4 bars with that same "tinkling" sound (sorry, I don't know the proper name for it - it wasn't the strings and it wasn't the snare, it sounded more like tiny bells) that you had at the end, then come back with the snare rhythm from 0:55 and for more effect have it loop twice. And boom, you've got yourself an ending.

At the very least, it's a continuation that you can use as a springboard if you wanted to extend the length, like if my idea was inspiring or something - just a thought. :)

Hope that helps! Once (if) this track gets done, I'd love to use it as background accompaniment to my demo reel. :D

Score: 8

"I love the snare drum"

by: Corpo-real

date: September 2, 2006

I love the snare drum in this song. Is it a real recording, or is it synthesized?

Score: 7

"(peeks into little black bag..)"

by: Little-Death

date: September 1, 2006

Searching black bag of bodies,body parts and souls...Looking for heads of expert musicians..)Sign...ok its like this:At the starting its soft and erriy,dats good.but u should try intensifying the end cause wats the point of a scary song without scary loud endings somethin like a church organ u no wat i mean?...ohya bi the way,the decaptiviated head of Beedoeven(or watever his name was)wouldnt gimme any adive so this is da best i can think of soz.

Score: 8

"DJ S. H."s Coment"

by: dj-s-h

date: August 29, 2006

This was amazing I cant believe my ears o my god it… oh that other person was so wrong the start needs something though I cant …. O it disserves to be 2 or 1 plays o and good work I think the ending needs something you r right man . Don’t forget to review min k DJ S. H. The Labyrinth o and it is 4/5 man.

Score: 10

"heh.."

by: Chronamut

date: August 28, 2006

sounds like you're using soundfonts - you ned to get better sounds man - or filter what you've got better :P sounds too midi-ish as it is now..

sounds kewl tho - mastering is acceptable.. no peaking or things out of place so to speak.. I'll review some of your other stuff ^^ (nice strings tho)

-shawn-