I've started to record quite a few songs using a program called Audacity, and this is generally the result. It's not the highest quality (I know,) I've been using my web-camera microphone to record. I'd like to know what you guys think, it's a quick put together thing, but I'd love to hear your feedback, I need help!

Lyrics-

Maybe we've waited for too long
For the right time to come around
and we'll waste away
with these mistakes we've made
and regret will eat us whole
as we walk around bridges on fire

See I've been looking at the stars Lately
And they're telling me I'm waiting
For the news I don't wanna hear
And I've been thinking so much lately
maybe i'm going crazy
But what happens when our worlds turn upside down?

The sun tells me it's all a lie
The sea tells me it's all right
and the moon
just reminds me of you

See I've been talkin to the stars Lately
And they're telling me I'm waiting
For the news I don't wanna hear
And I've been thinking so much lately
maybe i'm going crazy
But what happens when our worlds turn upside down?