Twas ok...

The clarity is the main problem with this piece. And the fact that you made this quickly doesn't help you. I'm sure that with a little extra time this could have been a great orchestral piece with violins and all.

Also, i think that this song should have been submitted in the classical section.

The piano was good but that's all that it was, a nice little piano melody.

Good luck with the contest.

good work.

just fix up your clarity cuz it was terrible. the track over all had a good soft feel and it was worth a listen an intresting submission peace syntrus out