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Uploaded
Jul 19, 2014 | 8:06 PM EDT
File Info
Song
5.2 MB
5 min 44 sec
Score
4.50 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.50 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
613 Plays | 11 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
Tags:
emo
away
acoustic
sail

Author Comments

Here is a song I wrote as I sang, just came straight from the heart at the time. It is a song about a breakup and this is what was going through my head at the time.

I decided that I would post this because I am trying to see what people think of my voice overall, and lyrics.

It was recorded with a cellphone, posted as a video, and then I extracted the sound file from the video. So the quality isn't "professional" or what you may be used to.

Hopefully you can look past that.
Please reply fairly and at the same time honestly.
Thank you so much,
Bradley

LYRICS:

Don't go, please, don't go,
Away....
And I, I swear, oh I swear, we'll find someday
Where we can, share our dreams & memories,
And if you, will just listen to me please...

(Bridge)

So tie me up, now, and here we go,
And I've sailed, oh sailed,
So tie me up, now, and here we go,
And I don't wanna sail,
And I don't wanna sail,
Away from you,
Away from you,
Away from you...

(Interlude)

I've fucked up, more than once in my life,
But at least I will admit when I am wrong,
You've fucked up, a little more than once or twice,
But you won't admit when you're wrong...

It's always, the stupid blame game, with you
You'll just bullshit life, to get right through,
Fuck you,
Cause -
I tried, so hard, to make you see that you were the one for me,
I tried, so hard, to make you believe that you were the one for me,

Well, look where this got us,
Well, look where we've gotten now,
Well, look where this got us,
Well, look where we've gotten now,

You're screaming, but, I can't hear a sound,
& I'm screaming, but, I don't want you around,
You're screaming, but, I can't hear a sound,
& I'm screaming, but, I don't want you around,

Don't want you around, (I)
Don't want you around, (I)
Don't want you around,

Written by: Bradley J Blei (2013)

Reviews


AtlasTheGaurdianAtlasTheGaurdian

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Kinky bae <3

no but really this was soothing music, thank you for the experience :)


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etherealwindsetherealwinds

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

When I can so clearly hear that a song is coming straight from the heart, I listen with a different ear. Less of an objectively judgmental one so that I can fully absorb the music as it was intended. However, I'll try. I could only really bring myself to take off 0.5 stars for the sound quality and for some flat notes in the vocals here and there, neither of which bothered me too much. I'd like to thank you for sharing such a raw performance with us. I'm more than sure that many people will find the lyrics relatable. I think you should think about going down to a studio one of these days and recording this and perhaps a few other originals. Really good job.


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CreateAndDestroy responds:

Thank you so much for this review, this really made me happy to read. I appreciate the kind words!

I would love to head into a studio, it's on the list of things to do :)

Again, thank you so so much!


oOzeroOooOzeroOo

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great work, especially for a kinda impromptu song >w< Nice vocals. The song gave me more of a bitter feeling than a sad one (not a bad thing, just not what I was expecting at first). I really enjoyed the first and second verses. Also, the rough quality of the recording kinda made the song seem more... real, so I didn't mind it. Hope to see more from you in the future! Have a good day ^u^


CreateAndDestroy responds:

Thanks so much, I hope to post more as well :)
Means a lot to me, thanks again!