just wonderin about the vocals and vibe of the song. want my voice to be grittier and less whiny, but at the same time don't wanna just force it. trying to find a middleground, let me know what you think

LYRICS

you held me down, ruled me with an iron fist
quite frankly i'm so sick of this, take this to your grave, take this
i know you're only doing your job but i couldn't care less for the air you breathe
it's all in one ear, out the other, you're like a fucking machine and my attention recedes
like your hairline, i can see you aging right before my eyes
its so damn sad, but i don't feel bad for you

this could be the greatest mistake you've ever made
this could be the worst of just as worse days

get out before its too late, there's more out there beyond those gates
wait

quite frankly i'm so sick of this, take this to your grave, take this
quite frankly i'm so sick of this, take this to your grave, take this
take this

oh! [stupid breakdown that doesn't translate well over to acoustic]

this could be the greatest mistake you've ever made
this could be the worst of just as worse days

get out before its too late, there's more out there beyond those gates
you had so much to look forward to, but don't take it out on the youth
it's so damn sad, but i don't feel bad for you