Nice

Wow this was pretty good I love the low beat but you really mix it up and gave it some drops then built it back up so very nice indeed Now this was sort of different especially from what I normally listen too but then it really catches my interest in a different way of sorts I had fun with this one it was good stuff its a pleasure to review this and stuff like this, This review is near its end but its a nice piece you have here, you really mix it up and gave it quality

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Needs more variation in it. I'm not sure if it did build up a bit but if it did then it is very subtle.
One bit of advice is if the build up is subtle, then you need to add another thing that is a bit noticeable and is interesting; adding more feel to the track. But don't ever change it to much. Every instrument should be complimenting each other and should be close to the original idea.
Anyway, you're getting better. It sounds like trance but the beat is 'video gamey' but i'm guessing you intended it to be. That makes this Video Game Trance! hahaaaaa. Yeah, im bored.

First of all, I like the synths and beat. I think you did a good job with the mixing this time, but this track is a little simplistic. Mixing will get harder once you have more instruments in your tracks. I'd suggest you try challenging yourself to mixing with some more complex harmonies in the near future. You can also try experimenting with Fruity Reeverb, Delay, Echo, etc. I think this track could've used a more interesting structure/progression, but it loops cleanly and has potential to be a really cool piece. Keep working at it, ROUGE! ;D You're doing well. ^^