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Uploaded
Jun 26, 2014 | 1:08 PM EDT
File Info
Song
7.5 MB
4 min 57 sec
Score
4.48 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.48 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
430 Plays | 5 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
Tags:
chill
dnb
melo
bobabobaboo

Author Comments

Still suck at arrangement, i think im getting ther with my mixz, but still feels souless.

kinda slow start, then it'll get smashed into a dnb beat with some distorted bass and filters, close to the end..

more recorded vocals by me lol not the best.

Key: G
BPM: 183

Enjoy. Feedback is always welcome.

Reviews


FinaLeeFinaLee

Rated 4 / 5 stars

That's a really punchy set of drums, but they feel a little too mechanical for me. Maybe you can liven them up with a little reverb. A couple of the sounds in the intro sounded a little cheesy, but that's just my personal tastes. Thought that vocal sound was pretty cool in the break at 1:04, but this is a pretty weird mix you got going on.

DnB breakdown was nice, but let me emphasize on the reverb thing I said earlier, because I know what you mean when you say your mix feels a little "soulless." Focus on some other subtleties like delay and stereo effects if you want to breathe a little more life into your track.

My two cents. I may not know what I'm talking about!


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Stapless responds:

thanks for the review, i was reading up on reverbs tips up before, so i'll your two cents as good value. :P


jawalker213jawalker213

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hello Stapless! I don't see why you say that you suck at arrangement. The beginning was a nice buildup moment to the more melodically charged section after 1:00. That section ended cleanly at 1:49 with enough variation to keep the interest going all the way till the break at 2:00. At 2:30 there's something new to keep driving the track, and it's unpredictability allows that to go smoothly on to another break at 3:00!

If anything your arrangement skills are what's good and makes this track interesting! With the feeling of soulless, I may suggest making more alternative drum patterns... what I mean is, taking the first section for example, and creating 3 alternative grooves that would fit with that, and then adding variety by cycling through different drum patterns within that section.

I do agree that the mix is good, and the vocals rocked! So awesome job and feel proud of your arrangement skills!


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Stapless responds:

Cheers for the feedback, kinda feel proud now haha.


epicethan127epicethan127

Rated 5 / 5 stars

It had a great build-up, with the start being a few drum beats and a laser like noise, and then into several noises. It had nice beat and was an overall great song.


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Stapless responds:

Thanks c: