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Metropolis

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I put more effort into this one than the others...Suggestions are greatly appreciated...

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its the beat..

this is weird and cool man. Now then it doesn't definantly count as trance but i don't know where else u would put it. The beat u need is different then this. 4 kicks hats in beatween do wutever u want with the clap. Make sure your base follows the hats oh and make it louder. make sure your base is in the same key as your synths. Does that make sense? Good though i like originality.

Suggestions?

Good song, I like the errie feel of the synths, but try to keep the drums simple, steady and grooey. Double kick + trance drums = kid of awkward sounding =P

Other than that, this song is crewed up and has left me crying, in a good way =P

Keep it up!

RoboX responds:

Wow really? Thanks ^-^

Well,

nice try, but one thing I am still working on as well, is if your going to have a full break in your song, you have to explode at full pace when you come back in. If you ease out to just a beat for a few seconds, then ease back in with the melody, but in a different tone. Again, nice try, keep it up ^^.

RoboX responds:

thanks :D

not too bad

in the second half, that one chop doesnt sound good when going that fast. Overall, its not a bad track, but i have to say trance isnt all that spectacular to me. Great effort tho, 8/10.

and yea, try using more bass :)

Needs more bass.

This is a good track, but personally I prefer tracks with more bass output, and differing time signatures. The slow to fast transition was excellent, as well as the fade at the end, but the song needs a more duration and heavier bass, IMO.

7/10.

Credits & Info

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Listens
1,149
Downloads
194
Votes
7
Score
4.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 8, 2006
1:52 AM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
2.2 MB
1 min 54 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.