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I decided to submit an unfinished version of what will be a very important piece in the cinematic story scenes of the game I am currently working on, Project Tokala. The finished version will be much longer, and complete with an actual choir and more refined sound quality. And it will only be heard upon release of the game, so this is just to give you all a taste of the majesty of this game, which I am currently working on mostly solo....putting together the storyline, and scenes, as well as characters, and concept art. Still looking for more folks to collaborate on ideas with, if anyone is ever interested. Check my journal for details. :)
LYRICS(Tokalan/English:)
Kielu, mukhsa unya
Nalaes unya fen niourto
Veru unies tahne aen vara gahl
Akh tes mireft ahsie
Father, hear us
Protect us from evil
Guide our steps this blessed day
With your shielding light
Jessismith responds:
Thank you. :)
Hauntingly beautiful and elegant. Vocals are exceprional as well as their translation. Would like to hear the full version when available.
Given that this is just a mock up, I would refrain from commenting on the techicalities apart from one thing that I think strings are louder than the voice burying the vocals behind. Also strings are too wet. But again I can assume the final version will be fantastic. Looking forward.
Jessismith responds:
Thank you. And yeah, the strings are really muddy, and the vocal is turned down due to quality of the mic I was using to record the vocal. The final version, once finally released as a soundtrack version, will hopefully sound much better. :D
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