Very much enjoyed this one, I think that the fact you may not have put as much time into this one as others doesn't really show. What I like about this one is that rhythmically it's consistent throughout, still being able to express your personal style of shifting through various moods/sections.

The musical ideas in this are very good the melody and the harmony work together really well. I liked 1:01 where it kind of had that breakdown with a cool chord progression. A couple of technicals that I think could be improved. 1) the main lead was way to loud at some points it was almost hard to listen to the music because that is all I could hear 2) The drums were muddy and did not sit in the mix as good as they could have, with that said for some reason the breakdown at 1:00 the kick really came through the mix, I don't know if you used a different sample or what, but I would use that kick for the whole song. The snare need to snap more and it was very burried so I would bring that up a bit, esp for drum and bass you need a snappy snare. I like all of the tom rolls in the begging and the end but to make them sit in the mix better I would pan them and also bring them up along with the snare. I think that the claps in the background were great! 3)Lastly some of the transitions in the song were a little weird for example around :37 the lead just dropped out and it made the song feel disjointed. However your use of pads was very could!

Ok, so keep up the good work and I wish you the best of luck :) Also, if you have any question about what I said feel free to PM me.

nice sounds