nice

Yes, it needs to be improved

That's true what you're saying. It needs improving.

i like it

I like this, could use some loder effects in there somehow it may help to improve it. other then that it was decent

Decent work here

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Nice song you got there

starts of with 8-bit sounds a loud bass. Interests me right away, very catchy! I see you want help on where to improve this song? Well.. You could change the bassline instead of adding new layers of melody. Or you could pitch up an octave. Add some background effects maybe, or give it some breakbeats. I think best would be to change chords though^-^
OR: 9, I dont recall hearing an 8-bit like song like this of yours.
DI: 7, Usually you work hard on this. There still was alot of diversity, but not in the way to keep it interesting. So.. I recommend adding new chords.
CL: 9, Some nice stuff for my speakers^-^
EF: 7, Good job, but I know you can do better
OV: 7, I hope youll finish this song, I really like it! =D

sweet i loved it!

i love the whole thing! its awesome! good job man!!!1