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MJ1 - Stream of Hope
I love the atmospheric nature of it, although the transition into :23 was a bit rushed in my opinion. I thought the bass at :23 was a little too loud, but the melodies were good. The mixing could be better in my opinion. The beat kind of gets drowned out by the synths sometimes. The breakdown at around 1:25 was a welcome structural relief, and I think you brought that hook back in at 2:00 effectively. I think it's coherent without being too repetitive, and well-structured/smooth-flowing as well. The ending was a little bit lazy in my opinion. I think you could've done something more creative there. That said, overall I liked the instruments, mood, transitions, and most of the rest! Keep up the good work, Madjasper1 ;)
After looking into what criticisms you gave me, I looked into the timings you also provided me with and I agreed with you! I never spotted these mistakes before, but I'm glad you told me. Next time I compose something, I will look more into those little details.
THIS IS AWESOME!!!!
Very pop, upbeat 70's ;3
I can't say really anything bad about your song, its very fresh, it's nice to listen to
I don't like it personally, but it's a very well done song
Liked that you changed up the bass lines enough to keep it flowing
Keep it up
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.
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