Stunning!
I was cruising 'round the classical Audio checking out the ones with the most appealing titles. This mainly because I'm looking for an intro song in my upcoming WoW video. When I listened to your piece I saw the story unfold before my eyes, the little text I wrote fitted in perfectly. The strong falling to the ground and the new heros rising. You sir, are a magican.
(I hope your profile has a site where I can link to.)