Very cool! I really like the mix of the strings with the grungy synths!

i would be interisted to hear what would happen if every transition was smoothed out, but it definitely has the workings of something greater :3

I can feel the damn beat once completed, madness x madness x madness. Go on man give it your best. Just don't use your ballz this time... or use 'em... idk :P
Yes definitely, you should continue improving and working on this, when you have the time! Do your schoolwork first so you don't get in the same trouble as I am right now... What a nasty bullshit -_-'
BTW maybe I can spare sometime for your picture, I'll do it for free man just send me the details... You didn't bother sending me a "nay" even :P