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I really suck at descriptions. I hope your guys and girls can describe your view on this peace in your comments ;)
Music made using Fruity Loops 11 and various East-West Quantum Leap libraries.
Nothing terribly wrong with this piece, it's listenable, but there's nothing particularly engaging in there, bar a brief refrain for piano near the end.
You're going for a big, 'epic', full ensemble sound but you're not utilising the ensemble very well. But it comes with practice. I'll give you a specific example however: I think the solo violin doesn't work here. It sounds out of place, because it's a very 'incomplete' overall sound. You have a full french horn section, full violins doing those staccato 16th notes, bass notes and reverse cymbals, and then some very very quiet trombones and a bass that doesn't have enough presence, and they all seem to be mixed at the same volume. It's just a bit messy.
I recognise the EWQLSO bass drum. You need to EQ out that high frequency because it sounds really off in this piece and doesn't work at all.
Don't be discouraged, I offer the above in the spirit of self-improvement. That's all we're all trying to do at the end of the day. Good luck with your future work.
Hey hey! Tnx for your comment man!
Im still really new to composing so i dont really know much about it. Your feedback is just what i need. I will try to pay more attention to the details you saw as not so good.
Again, tnx a lot!
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