Although I agree it does sound sort of messy, there's a good vibe to it and it seems to flow and harmonize well. It evolved well and I enjoyed listen to the changes in the song. It started to feel hopeful sometime in the middle and I felt a lot of different emotions to the end. Thanks for sharing this. :)

Hey hahha, I almost forgot to review this!
Somehow, I remembered now, although I'm late :3

I don't really care if it's a mess, it's really cool nonetheless ;)
This is a very interesting song... I'm not entirely sure how to review it though. This is one of those tracks I could just listen to when I want to chill a bit. I think you've outdone yourself with this one. This really caught me bu surprise, as I'm not used to music like this. It's a good thing though.

There is not really anything I could add to this, as I think the track is awesome as it is. You're using really HQ instruments, and even if it's messy, everything blends together perfectly o.O
The melodies and chords and beats that are there are pretty perfect.
Really, the only other musician that has made something similar that I know of is GhostLawyer (listen to this, for example: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/565975).

Actually, I think the beginning was the weakest part. I think that the percussion at the very start could've been cooler; that, or I would've gone for a slower start. Also, the ending seems to be a little sudden. A bit like you just decided: Meh, let's end this here and cut the instruments :3
That still doesn't remove any of my 5 stars though.

Awesome job ;)