It's quite an enjoyable piece, if rather repetitive and a bit too tight in dynamics. It has an interesting "oomph" throughout the whole track and while I wished it had a more dynamic progression, perhaps with more variations on the theme, I don't really have any particular complaint to point out speaking of structure. I like how the sound pans between the stereo channels, as it's a nice detail and it helps keeping the atmosphere a little more refreshing to listen to. I would work on making the sound less compressed and more immersive, by possibly introducing more background synths and leaving space for other themes to take place. It's a good effort nonetheless.
//FD
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Imagining the birthday scene in the movie Mommie Dearest. I also submitted this to the art-inspired competition along with the artwork that reminded me of the movie, and I'd like to thank FahBraccini for that.
As usual, all sounds made in fm8.
jawalker213 responds:
hmmm.. don't think you really know what you're talking about. That being said, I enjoyed hearing your opinion which help me focus on another aspect of production..
Love it! The mix i superb and the song never gets boring! :)
jawalker213 responds:
Thanks for your input motakay!
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