It's not a bad track for sure and overall, the structure and the idea behind this are interesting. The drums are relatively loud compared to the synths and even the bass, so I suggest you to turn them down a little bit and give some breathing space to the other instruments. The variations you applied are quite nice, even though I think the bass line could have had a bit more of character in the mix. Transitions should definitely be smoothed, either by applying more risers before the new sections are introduced or playing around frequency automations, also to make things more interesting to hear. The melody is quite good overall, but I wished it had some more depth, possibly by adding more background synths and sequenced arps, just a suggestion.
//FD