I like some of the ideas
The intro is just very long.

The cut off of ur synth works very well and makes the song very alive at 0:50-ish. The question is: do u know this long intro for this? Although I do like the intro, it has a weird feel about it that i cant help but adore.

Overall i'd like to hear a finished version of this, I believe in this project.

Keep it up
5'd