ok but.....

at beging it was good but then you with the bird and you should made it more godly battle than a theco. (aka make more like a final boss song than a mix)
i am saying this because the song and name are to difforent

Sounding good

Pretty unique track you have here. The transition with the birds and water fx is unusual but interesting going into the cool acid techno sequence. The strings sound good throughout, and the drums although a bit common fit well.
Nice one, maybe your sequencing skills would help you make more of a club oriented techno track someday?