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My longest song for now, i hope it sounds good :D
Nice! I like how its really long.
I prefer doing smaller songs though ^_^
I really like the progressive beat you have in this song, I didn't pay much attension to it when I first listened to it, but after a few days I remembered the beat and it got stuck in my head. Great job! It's a very memorable song.
Thank you :D
I haven't reviewed a song of yours in a LONG time! Long time no see! How are things?
Ok, let's start. Pretty impressive song! And yes, it is in fact your longest! How many bars was this song? Over 200?
The melody is very catchy and easy to listen to. Ii sounds like you used a saw for the melody, am I correct? The song holds a tone of simplicity, but has it's own variety without overdoing it.
I can see that over the months, years, whatever, you have used a LOT of lowering and rising frequencies in your songs in order to create the effect that it's ending, and then you bring it right back. It's starting to become overused. If I were you, I would try to find other tactics or techniques that could provide the same effect. You actually used the frequencies a lot in this song. Don't overdo it.
While the melody is catchy, it begins to become VERY repetitive, seeing as how it is the only melody present within the song. When the melody's frequency dropped and came back up, a second melody could've been placed behind it. After it played through a little bit, the original melody could've dropped off, leaving the new one to ring out a little, and then switching to bassline and beat until the original melody came back.
This keeps the song fresh, and erases as much repetitiveness as possible. The intro was very nice. It really changes a person's perspective on the song. At first you think that it would be very generic, and then it breaks down and you're like, "HELL YEAH! I CAN GET DOWN TO THIS!"
An overall amazing song Teo! Keep in mind what I said. It's good to find new techniques to uphold. Every song should have something different. If your run out of techniques, make new ones!
Keep up the awesome work Teo! I'll be listening till the end! :D
I will keep your tips in mind bro thanks <3
Freaking sick love it!! ^^
Nah, it doesn't sound good... It sounds great! It has been a while since I last reviewed something, so I'll do a big one right now!
The song's really catchy when the melody comes in and the ending was REALLY well made. The bass, like in every other songs you made, is perfect. I really love how it changes in the song, and is not always the same thing. It's not repetitive. The drums are great too, not too powerful but loud enough. I really liked it. Really, I loved the song and it would be something I would listen to multiple times.
Though, every song has its flaws. (Note that these "flaws" are mostly my personal opinion.) The melody was great and really catchy, I also liked the slight differences and effects you made with it, but, the thing that I didn't like about it was the fact that it is the only melody in the whole song. I found it really repetitive and really, the song could have used another melody at some point. It's only a personal opinion, though. If you wanted it to be like that, just disregard what I just said.
Also, the intro was too long for me :S Usually, I would expect the main melody of a song to come sooner in the song, not after the two minutes mark. I felt like after the two minute part, I was actually listening to a different song (But still good, though!). I don't know if that was what you were aiming for, but I actually think that the first two minutes weren't really fitting because of that delay on the main melody. It could have been a four or even three minute-long song, but yeah. Again, don't mind it if you don't think that's true or if you wanted it like that.
But yeah, like I said, the song is really awesome and catchy. The bass is really present and I love it. I only could find two "big" things that I didn't like, but the rest was great. All of the cut-off effects, ambient instruments and drums were awesome and brought something unique to the song. I really love the direction you're going with your music and I hope you keep making more! ^^
Keep it up! You're a great artist!
I know what you mean, my aim was to make it kind of loopy from the start so it could be used in cars with boom boom boom volume maximum bass if you understand me haha because we do wierd stuff like that in Greece, your opinion about another melody was wicked i think im gonna use it the next time and thanks for that. as for the very long intro and after that it seems like another song, well you're kind of right but that was the feel i wanted to give, the unexpected feeling. you got the points so i guess you're right after all, thanks for your suggestions, i am glad you liked it ^_^ don't forget i still have time to improve
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