I like this man great job!, I love the garage beat you put to this (Even though the snare could use a teensy bit more mid-low end, just to give it a bit more body). The bleepy synth thing is pretty cool to and Its nice that you've emphasised it and the dissonance in places is cool to even if it may seem out of tune to some which would be a valid critisism, one thing you would also want to do a little more as well perhaps is layering your kick or compressing it and carefully playing with the ratio to get the right level of punch through but overall...I liked it :). Keep it up~