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Once upon a time, there were three brave little Weenie brothers who travel the world with their homemade air balloon.
I had great fun while composing this. I felt alive again. I feel like I could do some film music that I have always dreamed doing.
Albion I, Symphonic Orchestra, LASS 2
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I can totally see it! This is fun, and it makes me think of Studio Ghibli films with Hayao Miyazaki's vivid imagination and fascination with flight.
You've got great ideas here! But you have the flute, harp, and horn all fighting for the foreground. They are around the same frequency range, and around the same volume. Check out this track:
Notice how when the harp, flute, and violin are all playing, different volumes and sometimes different octaves are used to set them apart, and one takes the lead while the others follow more in the background. I think this is what you need to do.
Also, I think this would sound more full if you added some sort of bass to more parts of it. Notice the presence of bass throughout the track that I linked to, and the effect it has on the sound. The music sounds less "empty" that way.
Though don't get stuck in the trap of always adding bass to everything everywhere. The "thinner" sections, when used right, can be a powerful part of the music.
Danman87 is always my favorite composer. :) Thank you for your awesome feedback. Will do what you said.
It's very joyful! And it could fit incredibly well in a film :D congratz!! :D
Thank you sir!
Awesome work Elitistinen, I especially love the part you have going that starts around 1:03
Very nice! :) would love to hear more like these.
Thank you, Mattashi :)
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