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I've missed working with this dude, so I decided I'd do something about it.
I present for you Better- a collaboration between LoveKavi and DJDj
One push into the portal
One well-intentional shove
One show of the importance
that was not permitted of
One look into the future
through fountains of falling sand
One self-discovered truth
that nothing is as it seems
For a minute and relax
Just try to find the message
buried in mah syntax
Im a supersonic, monophonic
sculpter of wax
And If it has a heartbeat
or a headphone jack
Then I'mma divvey out the lyrics
bet I never look back
But I'm off track, I see a massive lack
of substance to the words
Comin out the tower speakers
And I dont know where it's comin from, exactly
But it's got me feelin low,
as a matter-of-factly
I aint tryna start a fight
I dont wanna see a war
But I'm wrackin my brain
just tryna figure what it's all for
While I'm just here in the corner
shakin my head and singin
If you gon try to rule the world
I'm gon try to make it better
unique and groovy as always :D
Well, not /always/, persay. Honestly, I feel like this song and Dayjam were a little less catchy than what I had going with U.F.O. and Pushin Daisies, both of which are going to be re-released as longer tracks.
But I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate the feedback, thanks!
Yes! I like this beat so much! Such a nice message in the lyrics too-- you make rap actually NICE to listen to. Without all the cursing and the nonsense. Lovin' it!
Well, I am extremely glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for noticing.
Good shit, man.
Your style works well with these types of beat. If I was gonna say anything I'd say put a bit more power in your voice (not all the time though, for example, the ending and beginning work very well with that delivery)
Put out more!
Thanks man, I'll take that stuff into account in the future, and I'll definitely be releasing more tracks soon.
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